My heart leaks not blood
but melts like fired gold.
People do not know who
i am anymore.
A smile lights my face.
Like a little girl
with her golden finger paint.
I sit tracing my life
but all i see is you.
Real life
fortune, brought me
sweet kisses.
Alive? Yes more alive
than ever.
My breath escapes
when you wrap those arms
around me.
Standing time still...
So connected, God's richness
flows
soul to soul.
Could I exist without you?
Yes!
Do I ever want to
Never!
We are
a lifetime of golden opulence.
Author notes
~"After all, what was more important, in the end, than love?"
— Stephenie Meyer
"We love our crazymomma"
In a list
A contest entry
- A big big big big big CONTEST..pic inspired...you tell me what type of pic you want!! by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
1800 points, ended July 7, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - once you cared about a person, it was impossible to be logical about them anymore... by Forgot2Breathe.
300 points, ended August 21, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sappy love poems by crazymomma.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazingly Penned From Within.
This is a very loving piece here you inscribed. Well expressed, and I love the title of the poem on down to the last line.
Thanks for sharing your talented soul here, and keep bringing the heat. Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ 
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Loved the second line of your first stanza! A real killer! You are very good at expression the depth of you love with unusual images and thought provoking questions. An excellent write!
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Wow, Great write. I love the general concept of this poem. The whole life goes on without this someone, but even though life does go on, you don't want to go on without them, that concept is truly touching.
-My heart leaks not blood
but melts like fired gold.
This is my favorite line of the whole poem. I can totally relate to this feeling of the heart melting like pure gold.
Simply amazing, great write.
Keep up the great work.
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I really liked the questions at the end. I know I could live without my Luis but I would never want to. The imagery was wonderful and the romantic and loving tone was grand. thanks for entering and good luck
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Aaaaaaaw~
Love these lines:
We are
a lifetime of golden opulence.
Beautifully penned filled with emotions~
and the reference to heart melting like fire gold
Excellent!
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Passion and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Excellent, a SM quote...lovely poem, with richness and flame and smiles...beautiful metaphors and mysteries and true emotion in every word...excellent poem.
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this is beautiful
and fits the quote relly well
i almost cried
really great
very wonderful words
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oh I could never either..
wonderufl words..loved every line
specially loved --
So connected, God's richness
flows
soul to soul.
Could I exist without you?
Yes!
Do I ever want to
Never!
We are
a lifetime of golden opulence.
Thank you so much and good luck
Cind
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Beautiful
This is a great piece and speaks from the heart
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hmmm
Decisions decisions lol
can i submit two??? lol
Hugs to both of you! -
here is a second option..more love then erotic...your welcome to use both or either...pls make sure to post the pic or the link in your AN's
http://trinity-77.deviantart.com/art/Love-Is-19123575
Good luck
Cind -
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