A new start
Living again
Dignity
Purpose
Your true love
False
Emptiness
Always hurt
Aggravation
I bid you adieu
Finish me
Author notes
Specifically for this contest...
The poem leaves a lot to the readers minds...the space in the poem is a literal space; to be filled with the thoughts and perception of the audience. Enjoy...
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Comments
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kind of a myserius twist to this
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Thank you for entering my contest. I liked how you spaced the poem out. It was very interesting and ive never seen something like that. Great write and good luck
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Oooo this is good. You Deserve to win a medial for this one its good.
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Wow this is amazing i liked it alot. Its short but you made your point. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly -
wow so awesome! you are so creative and just an amazing writer!!!! good luck in the contest hon this is truly a winner to me!
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wow! it's short and sweet. i love it, though. it's very creative and i love the way you wrote it. the first stages of love are always the best. in the middle love starts to fade and in the end, you just want to die. i can recommend you to maybe read my poem...love fades. it kind of hits the same views on love at this one. great write!
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seems like the before and after...the infatuation stage vs. the problem stage
the finish me...so many interpretations. things have ended, you say goodbye...now it could be you telling her to finish you...it could be taken in a religious "kill me god" sense...literal or figurative in terms of "finish me"...telling someone to take your life, or just take your emotions aka your soul....
and im rambling again so ill shut up. but i like it...short, to the point, yet it tells a story.
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It's almost like an evolution of emotions in a relationship. One can assume it was either an unhappy ending, or the contemplation of what might be.
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cool
the areas in between allow for emotion
a sharing in a way
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