How do you prove life after death to someone who is closed down
That does not have an openness to look at what could be found
How do you teach someone to unlock their mind
To the wonders of the Almighty and worlds that intertwine
How do you prove the existence of souls gone before
To someone who has shut tight and closed their spiritual door
False teachings there are many, most proclaiming to come from God
But when we look outside ourselves we cannot know His love
Fear given by institutions of what may be found
May add to man’s confusion and misleading knowledge confound
Worry of what may happen if you search for yourself
Has been put in man’s subconscious to give institutions power and wealth
Yours by right of birth spiritual truth suppressed for so long
By some that give false teaching to the hungry throng
Sceptic you may be knowing only what somebody has said
But let that not influence your thoughts and put fear in your head
And don’t forget to ask for proof for one day it will be given
To the heart that has integrity and shows he is love driven
By simply contemplating on truth and love divine
You can get the inspiration to let His love unwind
To know the fact of who and what you really are
That our loved ones look over us and have not gone that far
To find they guide and inspire to help both persons to progress
To put right the wrongs done in life so that there is redress
Never be afraid to search in love and look for higher truth
For when you search with sincerity there can be spiritual proof
As the soul progresses knowledge will be given to a soul ready
And is precious for the finding to the heart that is steady
Don’t follow the masses, look for your own way
And you will find you will be given your own proof one day
A contest entry
- Fifty Options --- Big Points --- FIFTEEN MORE!!!!!!!! by VoltaicHypnosis.
2000 points, ended August 27, 2008, 39 entries
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Hmmmm...a lot of good flow and rhymes in this. I like the overall message of not being fearful and investing in sincerity; searching ourselves and the world around us. Yes, we should not be fearful of asking for proof. There are signs everywhere (outside and within ourselves). To simply consume whatever we are given doesn't seem like a viable way to grow (especially not in 'spiritual' matters I suppose). Good thought-provoking write that present ideas w/o 'shoving them' down another's throat. That was very tactful to me. Good job with this and good luck in the contest.
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Every single word rings true; you're walking the forever road, I'm walking it too, If I joined this site just to read this poem then it was worth it; please read my "Simple Philosophy" and you'll understand; your words are refined and beautiful; mine are raw and not those of an intelectuall mind; but they mean the same nevertheless, we all have our own styles, it is meant to be that way; one compliments the other, balance and grace, there is much to share
humblpye
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Nice to know there are other beings of light out there trying to awaken humanity. Havent had to chance to read your poem yet but will. I work at a college and use the computer at work and we break up for 6 weeks soon so it will be difficult, but will do my best. Nice to get to know you a little. Keep up the good work and just keep on keeping on. There are lots of people to reach out there. Have a nice day. Love and light.
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Thank you so much for your comments
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I have changed the font colour but am unsure how to change the date as I am fairly new to this and not that good on the computer. Hope this is ok.
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I'm very sorry but the length and font colour are highly perturbing. Please change the font colour and update the date so that I may view this more easily, thankyou.
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You speak a lot of truth in this piece, wonderfully penned. All the best in the contest
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THIS IS LOVELY
AND THE ONLY WAY TO GROW,
WHY WOULD ANYONE LOOK OUTSIDE THEMSELVES TO FIND TRUTH
WHEN IT HAS BEEN PLACED IN SUCH A SACRED PLACE,
WITHIN OUR SOULS
MASTERIECE OF TRUTH
GOD BLESS...
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God Bless
Thank you again dear friend for recognising what I am trying to impart.
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