I still suffer from the distance
so you have now gone very far away..
I know you walked with all confidence,
the day Angels gathered in heaven
as God awaits you to rest in peace..
You were just another
beautiful soul filling up the sky..
Years keep flying by
but your memories will always stay..
Some make me laugh, some make me cry..
If I just can turn back the hands of time
to hear your deep voice one more time..
Days are gone ..you are no more here
but I still follow your path..
The manners you taught me
you helped me bring out the best in me
I still live on the pure love
you always gave me..
Through all the tears and struggles
all what you left behind still lives with me..
A contest entry
- JUST WRITE ME A POEM by Swan song.
550 points, ended July 15, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very heaertfelt greeting card type poem well written and well done. Don't sniff at that greeting card poetry is big stuff in some cases perhaps you should send it in.
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This is so touching and it brings up some loving thoughts of my own father, also now passed on. We did not always get along well, he and I, but your words here help me to see the 'bigger picture', if you will, all the 'tears and struggles'...thanks for sharing so lovely a piece. Peace always, Rhonda
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Thank you Rhonda, I appreciate your sweet comment..sorry to hear about your dad also..and yes I used to be my daddy's princess...God bless them all!
Ruby
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Speechless
This poem and the ocean makes me so
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thank you my friend
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we use a pen while describing ourselves, and you use a heart to make your words a meaningful venture..this is how I felt while reading this wonderful verse...
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Missing is hard.
Beautiful expression.
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Beautiful!
Such a wonderful tribute to a special soul. The message is so truthful of what is left here for us to cherish even through the rough times. Super poem! Don
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this is purely amazing and so beautifully written.
It gave me such a feeling of sadness inside.
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I think your father and mine would have agreed on many things sweetheart even though they lived on different sides of the world.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Love Margaret
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wow...this write is very beautiful and is uplifting. cant wait to read some more.
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Aww what a nice poem about your father....
Paul
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Good morning Paul, Thank you my friend
Ruby
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