Inhale, Exhale
Living Life.
Author notes
Art link;
thedudette.files.wordpress.com/2007/03/breathe-you-are-alive.
A contest entry
- 4 Little Words..... by A peine Ici.
300 points, ended June 24, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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living life to the fullest, lol 4 words we wouldn't be around if we din't do this
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I hear that is the recipe for long life--keep breathing!
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Wonderful
Very powerful choice of four words. Best of luck in the contest.
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excellent choice of four words
what more could be said with four words beside the four you have chosen that put it all in a nut shell, LIVE that is what life is for. good one.
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Excellent
For I know I'm the walking dead in my grief when I can not breathe. Just four words. I just loved this write. You are awesome. My therapist has me do just what you wrote every time I see him.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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Which one first?
Inhale first or exhale first.
Accepted Living life.
Lol
the contest is all wrong four words my foot.
Yes you live excellent.
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wow - for only 4 words, you said it all! I live the brevity, yet depth, of this.
Well done!
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wow, 4 words that speak so much! this was brilliant, blew me away! keep penning!
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4 little words that say so much
Excellent hun!
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Never let anyone steal your breath away.
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I like this alot! This is personally powerful as I am part of a lung research group and they call it "The Breath of Hope" So to those who really get what you are saying..THIS IS POWERFUL!Bravo!
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true, true, tre.. loved it..awesum... short and sweet...
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That's as simple as it get's. One breath at a time life passes. Powerful...A good bad girl knows jus the right words to get the message across without wasting precious breaths.
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Awesome write my good bad girl. Very cool image to go with your words, very well done. Good to see you writing again. Best of luck in the contest.
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Yes! only four words and there you go... that is what being alive is all about. Well done. Juls
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