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Life is a story

Livnig Life is a story..
Of
Lying...
Cheating...
Wanting...
and
Becoming...
but
Whatee'r Life deals you...
The greatest gift is forgiveness!

Author notes

I'm one word over the limit I know...but if I remove the word you...it wouldn't be as effective in what i wanted to say.

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    I really love your take on the prompt. yes your words are so true. forgiveness is something that is important especially in life. I guess for me love is the greatest of the gifts in life. but like I said that's just me.

    you did an excellent job with the poem.

    good luck

    kat


  • Hope Angel silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    Your words are very wise and true. Forgiveness is one of life's greatest gifts, but I have to disagree on that it is the greatest gift. I think that love is. Wonderful poem though and much luck.


  • maralisa silver member
    June 25, 2008
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    how true your words are there is nothing more to cleanse the soul than forgiveness it helps us move forward in live with out anger as if we cannot forgive we are eaten up inside with anger fantastic take on the promt
    Whatee'r Life deals you...The greatest gift is forgiveness!good luckj in the contest


  • Frozentearz
    June 25, 2008

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    very effective within the meaning,
    best of luck to you in the contest.
    Warm thoughts.
    frozentearz


  • takemypainaway
    June 24, 2008

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    so true!! even for this kitty
    it seems that even though you are a word over you have an amazing poem!!
    best of luck

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