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Darkling Darlings (Acrostic)…



Delving deep beyond my thoughts,
As demons shriek their rage.
Reeling as my dreams are caught,
Kept twix’t my mind and page.
Living in delusions grasp,
I feel the darkness rise.
Nevermore I plead agasp,
Grind down this wall of lies.

Does illusion have a face?
At one with all my doubts.
Raging angel’s fall from grace,
Lay down thy seasoned shouts.
In a world of empty souls,
No loss, this life I own.
Gestalt, my mind and thunder roll,
So cold, my heart of stone.

Author notes

I had every intention of writing this about my friends & fellow dark souls, the 'Darkling Darlings' but it kind of went in a different direction when I started writing. Sorry, my friends, my bad...

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  • Draig aine gold member
    January 11
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    love it love it love it

    wonderfully dark and subline


  • PastelMoons gold member
    July 5, 2008
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    No reason to apologize.
    These are words
    after my heart!!
    just perfect!
    ~Pastel