Never will I leave
A contest entry
- 4 Little Words..... by Merry Christmas.
300 points, ended June 24, 2008, 13 entries
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My daddy tells me that all the time
Thanks for sharing!
Warmest,
Mylee -
Yep yep Nice four words. Mine never left though. Those that have left there children are selfish
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this is so deep and true, and a lot of fathers don't have the balls to say it, allthough they know they should, i love the depth you have used here, good luck in the contest, and as always keep up the wonderful writing ~Amy
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This is so clever, accurate, real....oh, and you have two lines and twelve words (giggle)
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Hello. Bravo, strong powerful words. Best of luck in this contest. My regards.
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This is a great entry with lots of truth and emotion.
God luck in the contest!
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beautifuly done
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