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Mushrooms

A fallow field;
Scene of beauty.
Faeries dance;
Glowing luminosity.

Quickstep quiet;
Soft sound making.
Unrivalled joy;
For the taking.

Pleasing sight;
Smiling face.
Straight flush;
With the ace.

Tranquil times;
Free of fear.
Makes me happy;
To be here.

Love and joy;
Friends/family.
All together;
Living happily.

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  • Naznomarn
    June 24, 2008

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    Oh no! It's semi-colon abuse!
    How... rude/disturbing an image.
    Back on subject. I did like. Especially the third stanza. Very good. A winning gamble and all that. I like.