Come to the crossroads
in a life
you dare to fold
with happiness and strife
The walways open
a key a door
as you breathe choken
you stand tall
The night dawns
on a day full of light
eyes forlorn
whats wrong or right
Confusion on the curtails
of something clear
dont dare he who fails
in a future thats always near
A contest entry
- JUST WRITE ME A POEM by Swan song.
550 points, ended July 15, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hi NickG
Good poem
I like the contrasts you make throughout this poem Well done
Please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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Nice
Nice Work Nick, My Fellow Poet!
It's funny how we often recite our poems over the phone and now here we are (Y)
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