How
I wish
things differed,
eluding joy
to fall in my lap,
tears stained cheeks so often,
till I took refuge in Wings
of omnipresent Almighty,
resting my decisions in His plans
heart forever soars light as a feather.
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The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.
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Beautiful
This is an exceptional write, It is inspiring and very creative.
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Thankyou
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great form and flow in this piece . i enjoyed it very much.
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Glad you liked this piece too
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indeed...! wow! this is really great..i like it esp the last two lines-"resting my decisions in His plans heart forever soars light as a feather"
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Thank you..I am glad you like it!
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Ahhh.... Just beautiful Faith
Always refreshing to read your work dear Auntie
♥Amber
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Thank you so much Amber..really glad to see you on my page!
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When heart is light, it flies, even without getting wings.Such is its nature.True..difficult to write within rules..you did it well Sister
bhaya
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Thank you bhaya for your kind words....
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very well done. wonderfully penned and a great example of form poetry
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Thank you so much!
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excellent.
this is such a beautiful piece. i love it.
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glad you like it!
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