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light as a kite

How
I wish
things differed,
eluding joy
to fall in my lap,
tears stained cheeks so often,
till I took refuge in Wings
of omnipresent Almighty,
resting my decisions in His plans
heart forever soars light as a feather.

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The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.

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  • pinkhawk
    August 10

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    indeed...! wow! this is really great..i like it esp the last two lines-"resting my decisions in His plans heart forever soars light as a feather"


  • Once Upon A Mind
    July 16

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    Ahhh.... Just beautiful Faith
    Always refreshing to read your work dear Auntie

    ♥Amber


  • Venugopal silver member
    June 25

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    When heart is light, it flies, even without getting wings.Such is its nature.True..difficult to write within rules..you did it well Sister
    bhaya


  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    June 24
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    very well done. wonderfully penned and a great example of form poetry


  • Aliya Abbas silver member
    June 24
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    excellent.

    this is such a beautiful piece. i love it.

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