inhaling the beauty of her pure sweet light
I bask in the joy of nature's wonder
invigorating, yet strangely calming
awash with innocence and the clarity of being
her baptism cleanses my soul as I drift
within a cloudlike existence
sorrows evaporating, like dew beneath the sun
as each new day dawns I am filled with
the need to embrace her so I too may glow
within the radiance of this brilliant aura
Author notes
Picture credit:
http://evelicious.deviantart.com/art/Bathing-Light-86190621
A contest entry
- A big big big big big CONTEST..pic inspired...you tell me what type of pic you want!! by CinfullyDelicious.
1800 points, ended July 7, 42 entries
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VERY SOOTHING!!!
Reading this just brings such calm and soothing feelings to me, a wonderful write!!
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And a brilliant poem to go with it! Just gorgeous! You have used such vibrant imagery for this. A wonderful piece.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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this is a beautful writ that is amazingly taken from the picture. it captures the light of it and really adds the life and th softness that I can feel when looking at the picture. I truly love this piece mum
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I love the angle you took here, i appreciated the light in speking of her..staying true to the picture in away too
A poem that just makes the reader feel uplifted, relaxed..a lovely thing to feel
I most liked --
sorrows evaporating, like dew beneath the sun
as each new day dawns
Thank you for this great entry, good luck
Cindy
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That old song...The title of your poem. I am not that much of a lady either! lol, I prefer jeans than nylons & dresses! ~Sie
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