I mean
it was just there
switching
swaying.
tantalized
teased .
What was eyes to do?
‘Eyes got a tail two’.
Author notes
For Dune Cat.
Art link; Photobucket.
A contest entry
- 10/20 QUICKIE! by Sensual Angel.
725 points, ended June 28, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh this is too cute!!! Perfect take on the picture. 
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what a great photo, so cute
and your words are so perfectly matched to the picture you have as prompt. really is cute as can possibly be. worthy of the gold trophy
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Excellent
What a precious poem. Congradulations on the GOLD. Well deserved.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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excellent
What a powerful take on the prompt. Congratulations on the gold. It was very well deserved.
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I love this poem a lot. this is so perfect for the prompt. excellent job on both.
good luck
kat
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Very cute and sooo cat like
Well done and best of luck...
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We have two kittens and they play with each other's tails, and their own, so often during the day. So cute to watch. Can sure understand this wirte. Such a cute picture too. Thanks for commenteing on my poetry earlier. Hope you are having a good evening.
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Aww thankyou
Dune cat loves it..I read it to him He keeps biting my feeet...If i had a tail..he would bite it...hehe
xx
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Afantastic take on the promt we are all diferant and unique and must learn to accept others peoples veiws and opinoins although we may not agree but it makes us a better person in diong so a fantasticully cute take on the promt
What was eyes to do?‘Eyes got a tail two’.
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Aww this is too cute and what a wonderful idea for the thoughts going on! Love it!
All the very best with this
Gaylene
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This is such a good way to get across the message and let people know that we are the same and that we shouldn't put standards on one another and not expect mistakes...enjoyed the graphic and message.
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friends do forgive us for making mistakes. I do so like this alot. You made me after a busy, stressful day. Well done. Juls
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hehe so cute!!! if was kitty i would have to get that tail too! lol
very cute
best of luck
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wow fantastic take on the promt good luck in the contest
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this is a great poem i like it alot!!
nice
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Makes me smile! Your sense of humour and love of cats is your style! You have done a good short write here!
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That is funny even for a non cat person. Hee hee! Mind you, looking at the picture and knowing nothing of cat fornication, I did think they were being VERY good friendz!!
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interesting and cool
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Creative!
Love this heartwarming take on the prompt! Great poem. Don
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