hands skimming hips
drawing me into your heat
cradling your face
to dip nearer and steal a kiss
you're the flame
I move closer to
while nectar drips
and settles on your skin
flames of wildfire
lick and tantalise
seeping their way
into valleys of desire
tasting warm breath
as you exhale your need
into sighs escaping
from hungry lips
shadowed contours
melting into you
as passion spirals
out of control
Author notes
Picture credit:
http://belladivine.deviantart.com/art/Intensity-64820172
A contest entry
- A big big big big big CONTEST..pic inspired...you tell me what type of pic you want!! by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
1800 points, ended July 7, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i love it.
its great.
i love how you describe so well. -
The passion can be felt echoing through the lines. "you're the flame I move closer to" Ny favourite bit
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You're passionate...with beautiful desires. One likes to explore your valley of desire.
It's an awesome write. -
awesome,well written ,the words are felt deeply
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Wow!
What a beautifully penned erotica!
How meaningful!
How seductive and inviting!
Kissing your 'valleys of desire', sweet lady!
Galaxy2
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All I can say is WOW! Sexy and sultry. Filled with erotic passions. Seductive and sensual! Beautiful write here. Absolutely beautiful
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symbols used in the poem r meaningful. its a good write
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wow. im speechless
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Both sensual and sexua
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Excellent
This poem is extremely hot. Gave me goosebumps. I was grabbed by the first line. -
This is great! And the picture to go with it is wonderful!
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amazing
fantastic. you captured lust perfectly.
i dont understand the magician part, it doesnt fit.
but its still amazing
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Nicely done. The only problem I had was with the Magician holding all the aces... it just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the piece, otherwise, your imagery was great and you created a great tone and rhythm to carry your words.
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a wonderful universal game is sketched here bringing the depth of love and touching the eternal joy in words..well done...
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Ooh!! this was really hot! and steamy
you did a wonderful job with the picture!!! the sensuality of your words just flowed right into the mind of the reader!! I really loved this!! Best of luck!
Angel
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Hot, hot, hot! Nice job Margaret, this is one of your best sensual writes yet I think.
All the best in the contest dear.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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wowwwy mummy. a hot and sesnaul write that is not over done so its not stemaing up the mirrors and windows to much but is written with a beautuy in the lines that is truly amazing. well done
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wow margaret..you write beautifully..good luck in the contest..xxx from all of us xxx
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oh sighhh..I read this like four times hehe amazing...the passion, love and sensuality there...your gift with this genre ever so present mum..I couldn;t be more proud for what you have done with this picture
I am gunna read it to Matt
Thanks, good luck
Cin
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hehehe...
I guess that means we won't see you for the rest of the night honey
Thank you
Your words of praise for my poetry mean more to me than you can ever imagine.
you
Mum 
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I'm in the mood, just purely sensual! Now this got me laughing! ~Sie
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