In dream
whispers feathered
Touch
Sensually stroking
thigh spreading
Touch
Unknown fingertips
stirring awakenings
Touch.
Author notes
Art link;
photobucket.com/albums/ii251/tkool58/sensual-1
A contest entry
- Thrill me by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 24, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hang on. . . turning on the AC..whew! You can really turn up the temperature with so few words, but ones that create incredible energy, feeling, and imagery!! Well done my good bad girl!
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sensual picture and your sensual words breathe life into it---Very Well Done
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says tons for the power
of a loving touch, very sensually profound penning of the simpler affections of life we are all gifted with to share with passion, wonder how many do?
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Soft feel to this, yet with a 'touch' of sensuality. For so few words, you still have a great image.
Well done!
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Highly effective and sensuous use of word "Touch" to arouse the reader! Your use of imagery and detail contributes to the whole write!
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So beautifully detailed... x
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Beautiful
Oh my you did live up to the contest theme. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh I do love this beautifully sensual piece. The repetition of 'touch' works well in this.
All the best.
Gaylene
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"Unknown fingertips" Ooooh! You are naughty. Highly sensuous. The repeating "Touch" is very effective.
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wow awesum i like it gr8 job
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Beautiful!
What a fantastic way to get the blood pressure going!! Such intensity of expression. The imagery grabs your reader and drags him in. Excelent poem. Don
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