Masquerades immunity
silences pain,
a broken shell
walks amongst people.
Hurts endeavors
cracked seams,
curling fragrant aromas
of skunks perfume.
Casting judgment
upon ones self,
holding lost convictions
prisoner in metal cuffs.
Hope dies inwardly cold...
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by TheQuietStorm.
300 points, ended July 4, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Heavy Hearted
Comments
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Absolutely incredible...you are a very talented writer! Best of luck in this contest...I will be back to read more of your work!
~Jillybean128
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beautifully penned. you have expressed yourself well! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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Heavy Hearted
This expresses the slow decay of one's possibility of gain or hope to their situation. Definately a painful way to demise. Excellent imagery and strong emotions drifting fast. Great job hun! Don
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