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A little birdie flew in my ear,
silently it sang; only I could hear.


Sprinting towards you I glow...


...longing.



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20 words

Prompt ~ How do I get you alone?

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 25, 2008

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    wow very good id say a gold if i was judging i loved it.... thanks for sharing this and good luck....!!!!!!!!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 24, 2008
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    This is just lovely ~ Thank you... x


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    this is a breath taking take on the quote and is certainly unique and really leaves the readers mine in wonder as well. well done sis


  • Errant Panther gold member
    June 24, 2008
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    breathtaking piece, lovely interpretation expressed here. best wishes in the contest my friend.