Never knowing the destiny
One touch that illuminates my soul
A stranger's aura passed through me
Author notes
Prompt: A stranger's touch
A contest entry
- Thrill me by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 24, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully engaging... x
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Yeah...... I know that feeling too! You are on a roll this morning my brother. Hitting close to my heart and my thoughts! You did a great job on this one!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Thanks aain my dear nyetta for the compliments on my poems. Thank you for the inspiration also. Don
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i like it for the most part. i dont understand "aluminate" instead of "illuminate."
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Thanks! I never noticed that error.
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Ah and if you were but that stranger passing in the night passion and smiles on a bed of roses as we share the secret of our nights...smile my friend Yeah we all could get lost within your lines.Excellent take on the prompt...good luck
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Wouldn't that be a wonderous moment in time! Thank you my dear for the dreams of life that allow us to rest peacefully in silent slumber knowing we are not alone. Your compliments are a breath of fresh air and pleasingly recieved. Don
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