Missed chance

Metamorphosis:
troglodyte to demi-god

your aura could cocoon my essence
with one gentle caress

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Prompt ~ A stranger's touch
15 words

A contest entry

Thrill me by Lavender Butterfly. 400 points, ended June 24, 2008, 10 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Lavender Butterfly
June 24, 2008
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Deeply engaging... x

Kari
June 24, 2008

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Oh now, this one is really unique!! I love the use of words..of course any poem with the talk of aura I dig.
Awesome job
Kari

right now

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