It comes....it goes...
effortlessly washing away my troubles...
cleansing my soul....
refreshing my inner being....
Drop...by drop....calming...soothing....
Taking my pain away....
Tap Tap...patting against my window as i stare out...
Telling me i need not cry anymore...the clouds weep for me...
Tap Tap...the pitter patter of the raindrops...
Perfectly in sync with my heartbeat...
I walk outside and let the cool drops cover me...cleanse me...
Washing me away along with my sorrow...putting me at peace..
As I become one....with the rain.
A contest entry
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450 points, ended August 5, 2008, 137 entries
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I like the onomotopoeia "tap tap". This was a very enjoyable poem to read. calming, and just a bit dark.
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Hmm, this is dreamingly amazing. I clitched to the words so tightly, it became a vibe of rythmical emotions spoken through the rain in my mind. This is simply a masterpiece within the gothic literature community. Great write.
Sincerely,
Deathwolf Tasagka
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Thank you. much appreciated. :]
Though honestly, this is nothing compared to your writes I've read so far.
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wow this is an amazing poem i love it it makes me feel idk its just really good lol btw i love rain haha
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amazing!
wow! this is REALLY good sis! it really is true too! keep writing!
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Incredible. The picture was just as captivating as the poem. Wow. Amazing write and I definitely love the flow of this. Keep writing <3
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Ah the rain. Rain can make you feel so refreshed after a very hard day. I love the flow in this piece.
I hope in time that the sun comes out to play though
Kari
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