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How I Want

I want to feel you next to me,
firm chest against breasts

I need to feel
your strength between my legs

I want you to taste the sweet flavour
emanating from between thighs

I need you in me teasing
until I shake and tremble,
begging you to stop
and begging you not to

I want you to feel the warmth
and wetness as you enter me
again and again

feeling me cramp
and seize around you,
bucking and pitching
from the pleasure like
we have never felt before

I need to hear you
cry out uncontrollably
as you climax reaching heights
we never knew existed

all of my muscles tightening to
a point that leaves me rigid

trembling as you hold me
close and kissing me deeply

Relaxing; your head
swimming in the moment

drunk with pleasure,
I will watch you fall asleep




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  • lunarlunacy
    February 4
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    sleep hell, when it's that good ya better take a breather and commence again! LOL.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    February 3

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    Thank you for your sensually beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Desire gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Woot~

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo



    Thank You for sharing Your Hotness~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • Desire gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    Holy Moly~

    Beauty of a verse You have penned what energy exuded within each line~
    Love this!!

    Had to get a photoshot
    Wonderful weaving of words~ kept my eyes glued to the screen- as I wiped up the drool
    before the heat evaporated it

    Woot!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Hotness and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • oceanbluize
    November 17, 2008

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    Omg is the woman in the poem single...lol...jk. True erotica here. Sensual...a beautiful use of imagination, entwined with vividness. a FANTASTIC write! I asked for creativity...and you delivered. Whew its hot in here. good luck!


  • Cannonsfire
    June 25, 2008

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    HOLY Mother of F..... I am off to the showers


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 24, 2008

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    ...sizzling Jul's...very well put, poetically, heated, still sensual too....I definitely felt the need


    first line I want feel..guessing should be I want to feel ?


    Wonderful, so glad you wrote this you truly did the pic justice

    Thank you and good luck



    Cin

  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 24, 2008
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    Here's another one for your Jul's...you can choice between either posted here for you from me and chris

    http://yuribonder.deviantart.com/art/Nude-40731214


    Cindy


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 24, 2008
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    here ya go:

    http://gertruda.deviantart.com/art/erotic-dream-796389

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