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Word Of Faith and Promise (Acrostic)

Missing image
Within the palm
Of my hands
Reality are
Dreams…

Officially we seek
Fruits of another

Forbidden ones we find
Absolutely the best
In the end
Thoughts and choices ours…
His words our foundation

Acceptance
No negotiating
Divine is He, the Guardian of the Way.

Promising eternal life
Rainbows of happiness and pain free
Ongoing fulfillment
Misery gone
Illness gone
Strength to overcome today’s trials
Eternal freedom rests securely over my life’s rainbow.

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End of the Rainbow
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  • Volfeng
    June 30, 2008

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    I am as always speechless, my love, The poem is beautiful as is the sentiment, as are you


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    This is a brilliant Acrostic Very beautiful to look at as well as read! Lovely poem


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    his is a beautiful write and I love the way you have written it in an acrostic and with rainbow colours to. you are magical and your words have a lot of deep meaning within them as well. well done mum