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Prayer On A Cloud

A prayer I say for you
and send on a cloud today,
may you have good health and strength
to help you along the way.

May you find true happiness
as the sun shines down on you,
I pray that you will feel better
and take pride in all you do.

May your nights be restful
and your days be truly bright,
may everything that comes your way
bring you feelings of delight.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    Like the optimism expressed in these lines; easy to read and understsand, good flow, rhythm and rhyme as well. Prayers always help.


  • tawk gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Beautiful and uplifting!!! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for caring I am here for you as well, I know that I am not the only one going through pain or hard times. I am so blessed to have so many who care. Your poem has brought a smile too my face thank you. Good luck in the contest and have a blessed day Theresa


  • a.changed-soul.
    June 24, 2008
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    Brilliant!

    Absolutely fantastic!

    This was beautifully written for Theresa, I know she'll love it as much as I do!
    Thanks for entering, best luck in the contest!



    P.S. I would give this three applauds...but I used all my points on the contest!