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NIGHT OF THE BURNING by trekkergirl

It is like the beating of silvery wings

at first it begins ever so slowly

then growing faster and faster

until I cannot grasp rhyme or reason.

 

All I know is that I cannot last much longer.

Then you appear

in your golden splender.

All illusion of discipline is left behind.

In a raging gale of needs and burning desire I take you.

For it is you, and only you that I need

have ever needed.

 

The only one who can save my life and wash away this terrible

burning that I feel.

As I touch you it is then that I feel it

yes you burn too

and in turn I burn even brighter.

 

Primal passions take hold

and together we ride the wind

with no sense of past, future, or present.

We only know the burning.

 

Later when the passions wane

we lie in each others arms spent

It is then that I try and tell you

of what it is that I feel.

You smile

and it is then that I know

you feel it too.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 30

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    Aww this is really sweet.. I really love the imagery here.. it's really soft and also sweet, the emotion in this write is really heartfelt as well.. Thank you very much for sharing and best of luck..

    Angel
  • Pretty

    Very pretty poem, trekker. Tasteful, sweet, romantic. Very well done.


  • Galaxy2
    June 24

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    How beautiful...
    'As I touch you it is then that I feel it
    Yes you burn too
    and in turn I burn ever brighter.'

    How passionate...
    You take me to the realm of ecstasy, honey!...
    'Primal passions hold
    and together we ride the wind
    with no sense of past, future, or present
    We only know the burning.'

    What a charming end...
    'Later when the passions wane
    we lie in each others' arms spent
    It is then that I try and tell you
    of what it is that I feel'....

    Let me kiss your sweet hands for writing the piece, sweetie!

    Galaxy2

    • trekkergirl gold member
      June 24
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      Galaxy's comment on my poem NIGHT OF THE BURNING

      Thank you very much for your beutiful comment on my poem. I am so very glad that you liked this poem so much!!

      I now feel that I wrote a good poem because you told me how you felt about it. And it affected you so much!

      Thanks again for sharing your wonderful thoughts on my work!

      I appreciate it.

      Hugs

      trekkergirl