Come now, please, I am tempted by your eyes,
everything from head to toe makes me weak.
Moisture form upon my neck, I release sighs,
as you become closer, I can no longer speak.
With a simple whisper, rolling softly off your lips
tender kisses released, made me long for more.
Gently you caress my cheek, then off to my hips,
I roll my eyes to the sky, inhaling what’s in store.
Darkness had embraced you, I promise to set it free.
Come along & grab my hand, tonight you are mine.
In a moment I’ll shed some light, just come and see.
We submerge in forever now & beat the hands of time.
Your hands are now shaking, fear is creeping in,
(Can this angel of light love me, or will she leave?)
My heart’s beating fast, as I weep from deep within,
inhaling your darkness, stripping the pain within.
Every heart beat of yours, now is in rhythm of mine,
you breathe with such hunger; you devour me.
My eyes now focus, on the face of a man so fine,
emptied his soul of pain, releasing a black Sea.
Within my arms he fell, as one we entwined.
Upon sheets of silver and gold’s we are now free.
He said goodbye to the misery & joined love divine,
he and I on passionate bliss, fate is marked…eternity.
Author notes
As everyone knows or should know, I am missing one of my Friends, Lord Merlynn, He is the best dark writer on this site. I know that he has been battling some tough things and I know he knows that I am always here, wishing him well and sending him my love. Yet I have recently came across another dark poet, whom is damn close with his writing and that is :
Volfeng, he is a fantastic dark writer and should be read.
You can find him here:
http://allpoetry.com/Volfeng
Lord Merlynn, You can find here:
http://allpoetry.com/Lord%20Merlynn
And if you cant find them there, ask me I will tell you where LMAO...( no they really dont keep tabs with me, but when they do they do)
This Piece is dedicated to both these guys, for showing me that dark can leave you breathless.
Love to you both.
A contest entry
- Fall Me In Love. by Pretty Britty.
1400 points, ended June 29, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is such a wonderful dedication, the words speak with feeling and meaning that I am sure will touch their hearts in such a beautiful way. you are amazing mum well done
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I'll have to go read up on both those men -
I'm very intrigued,
but this is a very good write;
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Great writing for two poets that are well worth the dedication, for their writing and for their friendship for you.
Great stuff
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I am honored by the co-dedication, the poem is wonderful. speechless
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You well deserve it and more. Thanks hon.
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