We are a lover's rhapsody slowly recited,
soft interplays of strength and weakness.
Blood fluently pulsing erotic rhythms,
humid air wandering, drowsy and thick.
Undress slowly, expose ample breasts,
hang them pendant to my gnawing lips.
Limpid eyes, wet and wide, watching barely
parting thighs, take me in time, you move slowly,
oh, no movement now- then softly, take me again
just to hold me... in the depths of you.
Supple flesh languished in moments
as memories gave way to thief of time.
Yet, loving you is my throb of immortality-
Author notes
Soft and Sensual Love ~ Under 30 Lines ~
A contest entry
- PIF Soft Adult by Riftkin.
675 points, ended July 1, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sensual, Erotica, Love and Happiness Contest by MYsecondchance.
700 points, ended July 9, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow this was amazing, the imagery was so intense, plus the picture was very nice.
great write and thanks for entering. -
very cool write my friend
delicious
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A wonderful soft and tender write, well done.
Best wishes in the contest
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Very very enticing here. Another good one!
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I truly like how your words all fit so tightly and stay on the point of the poem. Your pictures with your last two poems, excite me, sheesshh. It is the last damn thing I need at 70 getting social security. I am going to eat some oatmeal and go to sleep. Nice - very nice poem. You also know how to end a poem or tie it up in the last sentence or words. I am willing to bet that you are an English Major?
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I asked for soft love.. and soft and sensual I got. Thank you very much. Riftkin
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'Undress slowly, exposing ample breasts,
hang them pendant to my gnawing lips'
...Wow...that waters my mouth so much!
'Parting thighs, take me in time, take me slowly'
...I can't resist you baby!
'Supple flesh languishing in moments
while memories give way to thief of time,
and disappear in a throb of immortality'
...You're now trying to entangle me in philosophical thoughts...but I'm still concentrating on your naked beauty, honey!
Excellent erotica!
Kisses all over, baby!
Galaxy2
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It's very beautiful.
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