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I Ache For Him

I'm holding my head up high,
feeling the fear of everything,
slowly seep into my remaining soul...

and all is silent.

I fear loneliness,
though I know I am never alone..

 

His brown eyes

seize my soul with a resonating light

of pure love.

 

As I cling to pictures

and new memories,

I pull myself inside,

awaiting a new day.

 

My heart aches for his voice,

for his thoughts, for his smile.

 

I pine for him,

I sing for him,

I cry for him,

and though it's best,

 

I miss him dearly.

 

Just a little bit longer,

then I can hold him forever.

 

But for now,

my heart is pulling out,

my eyes are welded closed,

for there is nothing in my world

without him by my side. 

Do You Believe?

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  • AvhClove
    June 24
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    you have me ^_^ lol i love you and babe it's a GREAT write.

  • YoureNoGoodForMe gold member
    June 23

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    This is absolutely amazing. I loved your wording of everything, and the power that came from every line. The pain of missing someone is definitely shown through every word and the love is obviously there.

    "As I cling to pictures
    and new memories,
    I pull myself inside,
    awaiting a new day."

    Definitely some of my favorite lines. I especially liked the "new memories." Very inspiring.

    "I fear loneliness,
    though I know I am never alone."

    My other favorite lines. In such few words, there is such power and a definite deepness lingering through those lines. Incredible ! <3