Resting within
Her webbed wood
Her eyes full of peace
Storm clouds hear her chant
Trees feel her dance
Water can see her eternal smile
Mountains feel her desires
Deserts hear her lost words
The grounds feels her fury
Tornadoes see her pain
Lightning feels her passion
Thunder hears her roar
Rivers feel her peace
Flowers hear her eternal voice
Clouds see her strengths
Eternally
Nature makes up her heart
A contest entry
- The Gift Of Life [picture prompt] by greyhaime.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it sound okay?
Comments
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I liked the full nature aspect of this one, she is a divine and diverse creature.thanks for entering in my contest, but you not have the information I asked for in the rules.
cheers
Grey
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This poem os a winner I think..Nature indeed can teach us a lot if we just listen..
return the favor?
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