Baby you can't write those words,
But they don't make me feel sorry for you.
I told you that it was okay to tell me everything,
But don't you think that you've gone a little too far?
I don't need to know about your broken heart,
Because I am here to mend it.
I don't need to know about your past lovers,
Because I promise to be nothing like them.
You said that I am your present and future,
But I can't believe that while you're talking about the past.
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It's only what you take it as.
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Comments
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The way I take it as is he's still caught up in the past and he can't stop worrying.
I know how that is...
They're so into you, yet they can't help but talk about what went on and you're just like "shut uP!!"
haha...i know...i know
Sincerely,
Podo ~
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Wow, this is wonderful. Makes me want to not bring up past exs with any boyfriends I may have... hehe... well..... I dunno. Nice flow and great poem. Keep on writing, until you can't no more!!
xXDCXx
~Make Peace, Not War~
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This is a piece I think alot of people can relate to.
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I like it I like it I like it!!! *Jumps up and down excitedly.* So true! I've said this or thought it so many times over it's ridiculous. IF someone can't undertand why this is being said for ANY reason, then they're a complete idiot! xD
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