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The true test of the soul

Imagine if the world was not real
Tell me how would you feel?
If it was just a test for your soul
If you pass would you become whole?

Imagine if the world was a hologram
Would you really actually give a damn?
If it was just an illusion all of this
Is there any part of it you would miss?

Are we being manipulated from afar
From some species who live in the stars
And if our life was just an experiment
Tell me what would life really mean?

Or is our life but just a dream?
And nothing is what is seems?
Are we here by our own will?
This life you know is it a thrill?

As far as we know this world is real
Life is good, tell me how you feel?
Is living on Earth just a test of our soul?
Then peace, love and harmony is our goal

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  • Technicolor
    June 27, 2008

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    Whoot!
    Yay Karena!
    I really like this piece.
    My fave line, forever and ever! =
    "From some species who live in the stars"
    DD

  • WiltedRose0777
    June 23, 2008

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    great

    What a poem to make a person think... I love the first two lines of the second stanza. It's whimsical but also really serious. I love this poem.


  • lively banter
    June 23, 2008
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    I'm not looking for rhyme, sorry.