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Just Me & My Thoughts: F

Midnight comes; time for bed
Mind in limbo between tired and awake
I lie on my bed, rest my head on the pillow
A silk nightgown drapes over my body
My dream-like state is invaded with thoughts of you

Seems like ages since I saw you last
Your face is blurry in my mind
That smile of yours though, it shines bright
Your eyes sparkle like crystal
A smile develops on my tired face; I wonder if you’re smiling now

My mind shifts from the picture of your face to memories of the recent past
I roll onto my side and curl up tight
Picture that last time we were together;
That night we fell asleep
It was a passionate night; I love to reminisce

          You held me tight, my back pressed into you
          Kisses along my cheek and neck turned fierce
          Rolled me on my back and you were on top
          Tearing my clothes off, piece by piece
          You were aggressive; an animal

The smile comes off my face; I bite my lip as I remember
Lying on my back now, I open my eyes to see nipples growing perky through silk
My body is filled with heat
Hands slide over the silk of my nightgown
Thoughts run wild with the memory of that day

          Your tongue slid inside my pussy; your fingers holding my lips apart
          Licking in and out, sliding up and down
          Each time you tongued my rosebud I would tremble
          My back was arching off the bed; I was gasping for air
          My juices were flowing

I could feel myself getting wet now; I wanted to feel it
The silk was off in a flash; it billowed onto the floor
Licking my fingers, I fondled my breasts; just making those nipples harder
My fingers travelled south and my eyes watched
I teased myself as the memory continued

          Your fingers replaced your tongue; you had two in me
          You were slamming me so hard; reaching that special spot every time
          I was in complete and utter ecstasy
          Your tongue moved quickly at the same time; circles around my bud
          The double action made me go crazy; it was almost unbearable

My fingers had reached my lips; spreading them apart
The wetness had already begun dripping down me
I slid through it, soaking my fingers; biting my lip as I reached my bud
It was so tender; every time I touched it I’d react
Rubbing faster, I take fingers from my opposite hand and shove them in; hard

        You were grabbing a breast with one hand; so tight I almost screamed
        The pleasure I felt made me writhe; I wanted more
        I begged you to go faster, harder; you did
      As my heart raced and lungs pumped, I exploded; I swear I blacked out from the intensity
      Juice flowed from me and onto your fingers; into your mouth; you loved the taste

I could feel it coming now; that picture in my head felt real
I imagined my fingers as yours; aggressive; I couldn’t take it anymore
Gasping, feeling the tension peak, I burst the way I had with you
The juice covered my own fingers this time; my body couldn’t stay still
Shaking, my eyes rolled back; a great sigh escaped my lips

I pulled my fingers from the crevice, lifted them towards my face
With them came the juice from inside me; I looked at it between my fingers
Those fingers moved towards my mouth; my tongue stretched out to meet them
I wanted to know what you tasted
The salty sweetness filled my tastebuds; just as you said it would

My mind and body were equally tired; the dreamy smile returned to my face
I rolled back to my side; the wetness still between my legs;
Nipples began to soften as my heart rate slowed; breathing slowed to normal
I curled up my naked body, cuddling with my pillow
Imagining I was there again, falling asleep in your arms

Author notes

Just Me & My Thoughts: M (the male perspective) written by hardeepb...here's the link to make things easy:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4359537

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Comments


  • Still single
    July 15, 2008

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    Great write, a very sexy and sensual journey through your pleasure. I like the split story line as well, i think it really worked. thanks for the entry.


  • Lonely Christina
    June 25, 2008

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  • hardeepb
    June 23, 2008

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    PERFECT

    Such a good write as it fits perfectly with mine! I'm happy I made a M perspective, it turned out great...

    So beautiful, great connection =)