Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Laying the stones

Laying awake for hours
holding one another
Sleeping under the stars
never letting go
Kissing softly
not just the lips
Whispering seductively
into his ear
telling him he's the one
talking dirty
A slight chance
where you don't talk
and play hard to get
he thinks
about what you could be thinking
and you take this time
to play out your assets
and then you move in
like a jungle cat
and strike
as he sits in shock
as he watched you
transform
from a tiny bud
to a blossomed seductress

Author notes

I didn't want it to turn out this way but it did so yeah...

A contest entry

what do you think of it?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Angelflower
    July 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Aww this is really wonderful.. I really loved this. the imagery was really soft and sweet.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck!

    Angel


  • Sound of Madness
    June 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I like this, it's really pretty, and I love messing with guys, making them wonder what you're thinking. It keeps them on their toes, and keeps them guessing. Great write, and good luck in the contest.