I tried to run
tried to hide
wiping away
the tears I cried
I felt the pain
as it cut real deep
running away
the pain did seep
not from your actions
or the words you said
just so many memories
running through my head
I fall to my knees
watching as the rain fell
the tears flowed freely
in my life of hell
darkness surrounded me
the pain took me down
there in agony
my tears on the ground
A contest entry
- Give me the emotion I want from you. by LivingxXxProof.
800 points, ended June 24, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Very deep and powerful piece here :] The flow of this was great, and your rhyming was perfect.
"not from your actions
or the words you said
just so many memories
running through my head"
I think we all have relapses like that, and it does hurt. Incredible write. Thanks for sharing <3
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