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His Whisper (Poem and Custom BG)


The moon sings serene silence into the glow of morning;
And as grass’s fresh dew turns to glass with the radiant sun,
I hear Him whisper deep into my soul this imperative warning:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow - a mystery, and today is not done."

Author notes

Original Pictures: http://allpoetry.com/poem/1882188
http://allpoetry.com/poem/1816209

Both pictures were made 100% from scratch by me. The renders on both were done using a digital 3D program called Bryce 5. The edits, coloring, and fix ups were done using Photoshop CS3. If you have any other questions or don't believe that I made them from scratch, I can prove it.

Let me know what you think!

If you want your own custom background, let me know

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    July 2, 2008
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    You're so brilliant Tim

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    June 30, 2008

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    Ah I love the last line. And although I'm not entirely sure on the whole religion thing, as I get from the capitalisation of "Him", I still find this piece as amazingly universal.
    Although the rhyming is simple, this still makes for a great little poem.

    As for the background, definitely eye catching, the border especially. I like how the cross is offset, not sure if it's for anything significant. Sorry, lol My only thing is that the purples don't blend too brilliantly with the browns. But, still great. Well done for the honorable win

    • Sharcu silver member
      July 2, 2008
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      You're right... the colors don't blend well I guess I should have taken more time There isn't any significance with the angel of the cross, just how I took the pictures and drew it. Thanks for your opinion

      --Tim


  • Simply Simple
    June 28, 2008

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    Oooh. I like the poem. And the background is excellent. It takes talent to make such awesome graphics. nice work.


  • GraphicOholics
    June 27, 2008
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    Nice job

    can definitely tell this was photoshopped.


    • Sharcu silver member
      June 27, 2008
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      Well, its 100% original artwork.... I made this from scratch.


      • GraphicOholics
        June 27, 2008
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        I believe you

        I just mean I can tell this was done in photoshop


        • Sharcu silver member
          June 27, 2008
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          Actually, I used Bryce 5 to do the original renders... about 25+ hours put into these two pictures


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 26, 2008

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    I especially like the original "cross" picture with it's backgrund. The two pictures are outstanding but don't seem to "mesh" together, color wise and mood wise.

    • Sharcu silver member
      June 26, 2008
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      Thank you The main reason I combined these two was because they were original art and that I thought the member would like this (abstract and Christian), but he didn't like the colors.


  • StarEyes
    June 24, 2008

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    Oh where do I start? The background.... I love it! How cool is that? Love the look to it! and the poem, that is just amazing!! You are such a talent to have here my friend!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

    • Sharcu silver member
      June 24, 2008
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      Lowercase Prelude didn't like the colors so I made him a new one (you can look on his page) but I'm keeping this one on here for the contest rules. If you want me to put your name on it so you can use it, let me know. Thanks for the comment and clappies!

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