There is a truth
that's hidden deep
within my soul and bone.
From my youth
I've been a creep
and never had it shown.
I'm not about to tell
the thing I've hidden
for so long.
For I might as well
'come anti-ridden -
it's
just
that
wrong.
Author notes
An apparent revelation...
A contest entry
- Your deepest darkest secret... by AutumnsFlame.
662 points, ended September 1, 2008, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, how do you like my creativeness??
Comments
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such a tease
Now I want to know what it is ... best wishes in the contest
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ooh honey thsi is really good,
i love this, from you, we all have secrets,
i have many, we all do, its part of what claims us on the earth, secrets hehe
anyway i love the write, its great,
all my love,
kitty xx -
It may feel within your soul and bone...
but there's nothing of this 'wrong' nature that can't be 'cleaned', forgiven, reconciled... whatever is needed. Your bone and soul are perfectly what they are and I think we need to know that the essential wholeness of our 'make-up' is always there to be returned to, when we have the intention to make our way there.
MMmm... Don't know how personal or not this is, could just be for the contest.
I much like the form and good luck in the contest.
Sol
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This was pretty short, but even so I think I kinda liked this! Short, sweet and twisted! Very good!I like the rhyme in it and the way you set it up. This was interesting. Thank you for entering my contest.
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