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Your Loss

i guess i wasn't in the picture
out of sight out of mind
that's when you found your little whore
who, personally, we all think should go die

your friends were rooting for me
still are and always will be
but hey it's her you like now
but we know you will always love me

i could go cry
be very jealous
but hey why bother
it was just you being selfish

i live with my mistakes
time for you live with hers
yours will always haunt you though
because one is right here

and never will i disappear
just because your shallow
does not mean i will wallow
i will not wait for you

you chose the whore
left behind the good
hence the reason
it is your loss not mine

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  • Wowww. This was deep and I loved the "attitude" going on in this poem. It was nice and refreshing to read a poem without regret, but more or less a "Your loss, not mine." Hah! Absolutely captivating. I loved it. Every bit was just wow. I've felt like this before too so believe me, you're not alone. Great write ! <3