Your eyes are the color of beautiful,
a color i could get lost in for eternity,
your smile makes me forget my pain and sorrow,
your voice is my air,
your laugh makes me want to live for tomorrow,
forever i'll sing like an angel,
because you gave me my wings,
your courage makes me think,
your strength makes me wonder,
you are my support,
through the lighting and thunder,
your there for me,
to mend my broken heart,
you lit up my darkest days,
and i just want to tell you,
i love you,
and i love your everything.
A contest entry
- Are you a lover or a fighter? by Jamaica.
600 points, ended July 30, 2008, 27 entries
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This doesn't meet the line requirements of my contest.
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wow...
Savi, this is so beautiful! *melts* i had no idea...
thank you so much! such loving words right from the heart really mean the world to me
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okay well....
i am a lover...but i am willing to fight and give up everything for who and what i love,
idk...
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oh wow! this is so great! so sweet. good job. keep writing savi!
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Dude
dude this rocks! this is a awesome poem...keep writing
Emokid -
awwwwww!i wuv it!
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Awww this was beautiful :] There's so much emotion and love in every line, and it's definitely shown. You have a way with words =)
"your courage makes me think,
your strength makes me wonder,
you are my support,
through the lighting and thinder"
Absolutely loved those lines, except I think "thinder" was supposed to be "thunder"? Just a guess haha but otherwise it's amazinggg. Thanks for sharing
Keep writing<3
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