emerge from
tiny fingers
from which,
you've been grounded
thoughts heavy
but hopes so strong
they lift a wounded star
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie Just Because I Want to by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended June 23, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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And that is the only way to truely live! To emerge and find hope! Beautifully said, congrats on the bronze!
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thoughts heavy
but hopes so strong
they lift a wounded star.
That's some deep stuff there. Short poem, but it certainly said important things.
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even the smallest light shines in the dark
and the same could be said of this lil write
nice
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oh, thank you..
I try
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"thoughts heavy
but hopes so strong
they lift a wounded star"
this is really beautiful, Catie, congrats on the bronze!
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Well I also like this one here thank you very much for your entry goodlukc in my contest be well
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a wounded star...
a very interesting image
with the prompt of living.
i would have never guessed
and will like to say that i
am pleasantly surprise.
nice job.
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