I always loved her
but waited
for the perfect day
I was so
patient
she was so
perfect
but today
she showed me
the ring
that he had bought her.
A contest entry
- PIF - Free Verse Word Prompt by Dalaney.
850 points, ended July 4, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Dang! sure is hard to smile and say congratulations in that scenario but easy for me to say it to you
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thud! the arrow just went through my heart. This is so simply stated yet so very full of emotion - hope, love, heartbreak...patience. I adore this entry, Jeff. Love, Lane
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Life's a bitch.....
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been there! I was going to procrastinate today in fact, but decided to put it off 'til tomorrow.
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I'll reply later...
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Well i see....
great job here
Love
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