THE GOLDEN TEMPTOR
His blue eyes they beckon me
Tempt me
Plead for me to release my control.
To take him as the ancestors of old.
He does not know nor
Realize the danger he faces….
He cannot know my flames.
He would not accept the inequality of our physical strengths.
He would not bow to my superiority.
Surrender is not in his nature.
Why then does he continue with this…
Why does he not realize the affect he has on me?
What would he do if I gave in…
Released my flames
Would he then accept my love?
A contest entry
- Romance... (ladies only!!) by Angelflower.
1500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 23 entries
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This poem is full of emotion.I feel that someone could be holding there love within in fear of getting hurt.I love this write and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Interesting. Sounds like someone holding back their love for fear of maybe losing it, or losing themselves to someone else. I thought it was said very well with much feeling and wonder. It's as if this person was trying to understand something about love they could not grasp. Feelings held back sometimes allow the one you seek to slip away. It also conveys a feeling that you are trying hard to avoid allowing the feelings to flow, while your temptor beckons strongly. Well done, Trekkergirl.
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This was really interesting.. I really enjoyed the emotion here.. You did a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..
Angel
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Hmm.
Now I see why this was called The Golden Temptor. Suppressed feelings for another is always a tough thing to deal with, & you conveyed that here. Fine work.
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