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My Precious Friend

As I sit alone in this darkend room...
In my life full of gloom.

I pull out my candy coated razor blade,
When it touches my skin all my problems just fade.

"Oh my precious razor blade,
where would I be with out you?"
You are my life.

When Im with out you...
I feel lonley and incomplete.
No others can compete.

With you, my lil razor,
I do wonders to my arm
I cause myself my own harm.

Please my beautiful friend,
never leave my side.
For without you I might never die....

This about me and my razor...judge if you want I dont care

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  • Boxingboy
    July 3, 2008

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    hey i like this poem

    and no bad that's not a good thing if you love the razor believe not a good thing


    just saying


  • xXmimi...crunkXx
    June 30, 2008

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    Have you ever put a razor to your tongue?
    Aha, i have...it wasnt pleasant =/
    But i do indeed love this


  • LittleMissFaith
    June 28, 2008

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    this was a good write.
    i've written a poem on cutting too, similar title i suppose. and the idea of personifying the blade.
    so i know how this feels.
    good work.

  • will
    June 27, 2008
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    well i dont know really what to say


  • Chrysalis
    June 26, 2008

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    Everyone has their way of escape... some cut, some curse and scream their lungs out, or just stay locked away from the world. God, that sounds so emo. Lol. But it’s cool. I just usually stay somewhere private and have my headphones on and not bother about anything. I used to write about cutting but not anymore though... you stay strong. I know for a fact that things won't always be this way for you.
    I love your idea of being friends with sweet ol razor blade. Sweet, sick and dark… the usual mix for being emo. Fab wirte!

    Blessed be
    Blanche

  • Bob Fox
    June 24, 2008

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    The cutter

    Knowing the urge to cut I must say that we, those that deal with self loath and deprssion must stand together. Many of my poems deal with this subject and my life has grown stronger since I write about it. A brave write. Stay strong young lady.


  • Emo Hearted Emz
    June 24, 2008
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    Whoa Very Cutting Edge but i love it

    this poem is exactly how i feel at time but this is wonderfully written keep it up


  • Cody.GoodbyeAP.
    June 24, 2008

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    This was a good write my Amandabear :]
    Cutting is wrong, but everyone has there way of relief.
    (mine is breaking shit and screaming)

    ILY :]


    <-----Me :]


  • xDisasterous Angelx
    June 23, 2008
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    <----Me

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