I gut you little angel
Last love in a sea of misery
I'll kill you little angel
Your betrayal last one told
I'll tear you little angel
Your misery will be mine
I'll bury you little angel
Beneath the poison sky
Author notes
Hey dd cool contest thanks for the invite this ones for you! option 2
The northernstar
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Comments
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well its a good poem. but there isnt really any sexy that i was looking for. great poem though! good luck and thanx for entering!
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very good dd I love this congrades your a finalist
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Wow the last couplet holds a lot of power. I especiaqlly like the "poison sky" image. Keep writing
~Diana
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wow this really kool I like it a lot thanks for entering I'm adding it to my finalist list
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