you look to me with your big brown eyes
and tell me im your golden star
you say i shine brighter than the rest
but still you left me here alone
in the darkness shadows lurking all around
if am your golden star then why did you leave me
A contest entry
- Folklor strikes again with another contest! by Folklor.
600 points, ended June 29, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow simple and painful. this is beautiful. I loved the metaphor you used to describe yourself throughout. I really like the way you included a third person and thei oinion about you. it made the poem even more interesting.
'you say i shine brighter than the rest'
well done
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awww, this is sad
but great write and good luck
take care
stephanie
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Cant see the poem
You need to change your background my friend!
wolf
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