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Never Again

there's not a day that goes by that i dont think about you,
not a day that goes by that i dont want to be the way we were.
'cause i'd do anything to see your smile, look in your eyes and
just be with you again.
i miss how we were 6 months ago,
talking about running away and

how nothing could stop us in those city lights
and never again would we see these skies.
how there's a new life out there just waiting
for us to come and claim it as our own.
we'd keep eachother company and you'd protect
me from those harsh Chicago winds

oh how i wish you were right by my side,
and oh my God i just need you tonight.
'cause you do everything to make me smile, and when you looked in my eyes
i never wanted those moments to end.
dont turn off your phone baby,
lets talk all night about

how nothing could stop us in those city lights
and never again would we see these skies
how there's a new life out there just waiting
for us to come and claim it as our own
we'd keep eachother company and you'd protect
me from those harsh Chicago winds

i'm still working on it, but i actually really really like this one.

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  • lovexinxcoldxblood
    June 25, 2008
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    yeah. add some puntuation and rhyme. u r golden. POPCORN!!!

    • thewayshefeels
      June 25, 2008
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      it's a song,hun ;P
      me&Eric are working on putting some acoustic guitar with it.