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Haiku 135

on this cold morning
the new day's watery light
is fresh and unsoiled

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Shenton

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 24, 2008
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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    on this cold morning
    the new day's watery light
    is fresh and unsoiled


    This Haiku brings vivid images of the clear sunlight and even the transparent dew drops resting on flora.
    Well-expressed.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    "the new day's watery light; is fresh and unsoiled" LOVE IT! I really like this a lot Good Luck in the contest


    • Shenton silver member
      June 24, 2008
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      Thankyou for reading and commenting, and for your kind applause.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton