The pain I have just won't leave me,
I hold it all inside my heart.
And I just want to feel again,
And the blade is where I'll start.
I just want to feel better,
I wish that I could sleep forever.
But the blade won't let the worst occur,
It makes sure I continue my stay on earth.
And so I bleed,
So that I can see,
So just leave me be,
I just want to sleep.
It all comes down
It all comes down around me.
But I hear no sound.
The blood's in my head pounding.
The pain just keeps on growing,
I just wish the blood could keep on flowing.
And so I bleed,
So that I can see,
So just leave me be,
I just wan't to sleep.
My heart, it bursts with pain and grief,
Death has come just like a thief,
Has stolen my life worth living,
So now all I do is keep on giving.
Your pain is more important,
I'll take it off your shoulders,
As you get warmer I get colder.
Until I bleed again.
So now I bleed,
For you more than for me,
I know it helps for you to see,
And you no longer look at me.
And so I bleed,
So that I can see,
So just let me be,
I just wan't to sleep.
Forever.
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amazing
this is wonderful a love it!!! -
unbelievable.....
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The pain I have just won't leave me,
I hold it all inside my heart.
And I just want to feel again,
And the blade is where I'll start.
Wow this verse really blew me away so sad yet beautiful.
I enjoyed reading your poem it touched my heart, talented piece. I can relate to this piece right now your poem made a difference to me it made me not cut. Thank you very much for sharing your work -
brilliant
Wow, this poem was amazing and completely describes how I feel sometimes!!
I loved how it flowed smoothly and the vivid imagery portrayed in this ..
I could really feel your pain.
Great write
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Wow... This is a really powerful piece of writing, it's filled with such emotion that I can't even imagine....
I could almost hear this piece being sung, it would make a really good song....
Once again wow.... Really good write....
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I liked the peom it was very good, very well written. I liked the sleep forever part I can relate to that.
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wow this was powerful. nice work.
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This is very powerful. I like this alot.
I just want to feel better,
I wish that I could sleep forever.
I could really relate to that a few months ago. -
i like it very well written
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