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Little Puddles (Haiku)

Summer raindrops fall
ripples in little puddles -
reflection of life

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Griswold

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  • Neha Sharma silver member
    June 25, 2008
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    Hey, loved the words
    They are beautiful and peaceful.
    Thanks for sharing
    -Neha


  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 24, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    Summer raindrops fall
    ripples in little puddles -
    reflection of life


    This Haiku creates a beautiful and serene image of summer-time rainfall and the nature around.
    Well-done.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 24, 2008
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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    wonderfully penned.


    Good luck to you


    Passionspromise


  • ScarletO gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    How cute and such a simple thought to ponder. Well done


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    aw, this is good...the last line is awesome and i like the imagery in the first two lines!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    awww this is a beautiful little haiku and i love the imagery that it manages to produce dad. well done with this piece

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