UPON THE WIND
Oh child of moon child of light,
gather stardust mid snowy night.
Bring to life that what has died,
pain and darkness dwell inside.
Let my magic spell bring forth,
fly love to me oh wind of north.
Save him from hands of death,
sound from grave, final breath.
Rise this night, bring him near,
return to me on midnight clear.
Melt snow let winds blow free,
from death come back to me.
Let spirits take hold this night,
senses dance, love takes flight.
Into the cold wind spell is cast,
undo the evil from the past .
Spell bring forth, sear two souls,
this night let love make us whole.
Call to you neath frozen ground,
in life, in death, forever bound.
Author notes
Picture Option #1
In a list
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt: FANTASY & DARK Part I by Rinoasis.
600 points, ended July 13, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Fantastic!
Your rhyme and perfect attention to the picture prompt is wonderful! I always love to read your work you are so talented!
Thanks for sharing,
Good luck in the contest!
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This has to be a winner between the pic and the write...It is so original! Just as the prayer is..A prayer for her love. There is alot of work you have done on this write to make it as the poems of a woman with the spell in prayer to bring him home! Bravo!
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Good Morning Rose
How is my dear sis today. Thank you for this lovely comment. I so appreciate you stopping by and reading. You take care. Hugs and Smiles and many Blessings for you.
Always, Sandy
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SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Such beautiful and heartfelt words which go perfectly with this beautiful picture.
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Hello Kevin
Good Morning my friends. I hope you are enjoying this cooler weather in Penn. So glad that real hot weather is gone. Thank you for this nice comment. You take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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Ahhhh fantasy! many get confused, betwen fantasy and reality. but so is life and dreams and heartaches, as we strive to get the best love and have it returned as long as we live. Love is most beautiful thing to possess and share, giving it to one that you love and cherish is marvelous. Thank you friend.
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Thank You Jules
Good Morning to you. Thank you for this lovely comment. I appreciate you stopping by. You take care and have a wonderful day.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Wow ~
Sweet Sissy Sandy.....this is a simply gorgeous......spell-binding ~
Yes, there are some areas I would have liked to of seen a few commas to slow down your Reader, to partake of everything beautiful and magical you have pennd.....but regardless, this still reads well and is well-rounded in imagry and show & tell ~
Everything from your Presentation to your Format is superb.....I fell in love with this the moemnet I started reading it :)
Each stanza has something to add to this picture......you have wisely chosen grammatical choices as well ~
Over-all.....I see this with a nice Trophy topping it soon!
Good luck and God bless you!
Brother Bear ~
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What A Beautiful Comment!!!
My Dear Sweet Bear, Your comment was so lovely and I so appreciate your thoughts on my poetry. You are such a talent and I always enjoy your words of encouragement. You have a beautiful day. Hugs and Smiles, Take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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The first stanza is my favourite. It's really interesting because Moonchild is my magickal/pagan name and light is my element. I'm glad you chose this picture because I personally love this one a lot.
The rhyme is excellent and flows well and freely, it does not feel forced. I also think it's interesting how you interpeted this pic by thinking of wind.
Thank you so much for entering my contest!
Blessings & Light,
~Evolet
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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oh man this is so incredably cool it has such a mystical feel to it that makes me grin! You are such an awesome poet I can't beleive how cool this is! Seriously this the best poem I have read all day it has such an intresting imagry to it that captures the mind you should deffinatly win this contest!
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Wonderful Comment
Good Morning. Thank you so much for this lovely comment. I appreciae you stopping by and reading. You take care.
bless You,
Sandy
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Captivating
It's almost like a fairytale, and what a wonderful tale it is. It flows and has good rhythm, and feeds the imagination. You really made that picture come to life too. Good luck in the contest.
Bless you my friend.
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Good Morning Dear Friend
Hi Ron, Such a pleasure to read your thoughtful and caring comments. So glad you enjoyed reading it. You take care and I hope you enjoy this wonderful summer day.
Many Smiles!!!
Bless You, Sandy
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The beauty
You have brought forth gosh...mac
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Hello Dear Friend
Thank you for reading and commenting. Always so nice to hear from you. Hugs ands smiles. You take care.
Blessings To You,
Sandy
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hmm
I really liked this. The rhyming was pretty much perfect. And it feels really... free! :] -
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Hello, I appreciate reading your thoughts on my poetry. Thsnk you for the very nice comment. You have a wonderful day.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Very ethereal and soft. The lack of really tactile imagery works well with the dreamlike feel of this piece. Nice rhyming scheme too.
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Lovely Comment
Thasnk you for reading. Your comment was most appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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FANTASTIC!!!
sorry about last comment i pressed "enter".
this is a very touching write, and i know how hard it was for you to write this masterpeice. this is a wondeful poem and i wish that everyone had the chance to read this write. i love the title. "upon the wind" is just a perfectly describing title for this poem.
i truly, really do hope you write other writes that are this good. thank you for the pleasure of reading this poem.
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Lovely Comment
Good Morning. Thank you for reading my poerm and leaving this very thoughtful comment. I appreciate your words so much. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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What a lovely fantasy.The rhyme and movement is smooth and the reader is caught up in the moment to save the one from death as the spell is cast. The picture is wonderfully fluid and the poem leaves images for the reader to engulf. I wish you the very best of luck with this work to charm all who read it.
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Good Morning
Well Hello Dan, Your comment brings a smile this summer morn. You always say the nicest things about my poetry. Very thoughtful comments that I so appreciate. You have a wonderful day my friend.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Good rhyming pattern, good content and it goes well with the picture. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank You Nursery Poo
Another very nice comment from you. I do appreciate you stopping by and commenting. You take care,
Bless You,
Sandy
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Gosh.
I read this twice and then again and each time I said it out loud and the louder I said it I felt as though I was standing in mist of the snow and singing this melody.
Absolutely beautiful
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Lovely Comment.
Ah Dear Amanda, your sweet comment made me smile. I am glad you enjoyed it. Alwaysd so nice to hear from you. Many hugs and Smiles for you.
Blessings For You,
Sandy
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