an emu is a bird with a very long neck
ants are tenacious and comparable to soldiers
nine out of ten cats are ninety percent
i'm sure i left the iron on
maybe she will call
i collect clouds in my space
the grass was greener back then
my favourite animal is lamb
"that" is an anagram of something
it's colder than it used to be
i love you for your weakness
my pocket aces got busted again
eyebrows? in this day and age
don't jump go higher
you can kiss my art
an emu is a bird with a very long neck
faster though than a zebra
it's black and white really.
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agh! stream of consciousness--or even less conscious, more mindless observations and random thought processes. thinking around the subject. i like how you interject the important, relevant details with the irrelevant. try to take your mind off them by stating them as facts, alongside your favorite animal and the current eyebrow fashion of society. i especially think the title works to this extent. the ending really clinches the tie-ins between each line. your work, as i have seen so far, is pretty brilliant.
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anima is a bruise where the very long neck ends short
it spits the art people tend to kiss
a white spot on a black tooth
in a grey jump suit
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its just because its there
everybody moves in their tangents
and when they collide
trigger-nomitry baby
and shapes of things.
to come.
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algae, zebra's pent ermine
anyone taller by a finger
chew the soup and mime the vapor
editor trance page scent
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i could start a conquest
where i am bland again
a tapestry woven wove spun spinned grail flail gold
in a vapor snail
wash its space
and watch your corned beef tin
whowantstogetontvoreventurniton
most.
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tin canned cube garbage can
hanging from a cabbage crane
in hare tuition form
the very blonde intuition
flock above
the cuckoo nest
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juicy fruition of cellulite heaving heavy chins
swallowing summer
the label said so
and popeye ate
and olive
oiled.
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i'm not gonna tell you how many times i've read this...you are astounding, you know. phucking incredible. insanely brilliant..you are. love love it.
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spanx
i am eating noodles tomorrow now
you've just made my mind up
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tater tots flop on deck...a big tittied woman bursts from a cake...this kicks ass...love love this. it's whats in my head
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celebration of freedom drinking slugs will result with salt sprayed like an orchard
and pair picking.
my tweezers are 90 degrees
and my grandma has a gun
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