A light casts a shadow
at the end of a tunnel
Forget about the past
To find the fundamental.
Chaos is law.
So you have to abide.
For it is futile to hide,
from a monster that thrives
right by your side.
Starving creatures,
one after another.
Walking with seizures,
and gnawing at their own bones.
Clever devils at eye level.
Contemplating more bloodshed.
The mask they wear is splattered,
with red images of war.
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
i adore this title and it really sets up this piece perfectly. iagree there is most often in life no light st the end of the tunnel and disappointment abundant. this shows poem shows the most often than not side of life well done!
-
why wouldnt there be light at the end of the tunnel? and chaos is the reason for law. this is kinda depressing really... no offense
is that better -
-
Why does there always have to be light at the end of the tunnel? Is there a written law that proves that? No there is not. Besides I am agnostic, so I'm not religious. Choas is not the reason for law. There has to be a balance between the two. Your poems are depressing in my opinion as well, however I don't tell you that your poems are depressing. And if I do, atleast I say good things about them too. If you don't like it that's fine, because quite honestly I don't really like your style of writing either, but atleast I don't purposefully try to be mean about it. I find it amusing that when I say bad things about your poem in the past you yell at me for it, and now you are the one bashing my poetry.
-
-
great to see you back writing
-
-
see you don't say much about the poem itself either. So why do you fuss at me when I don't say much?
-
-
this was very intresting to read, i enjoyed it
nice to see you writting and take care
stephanie
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
